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What do you look for in historical fiction?

May 20th, 2013 | Career, Current Affairs, Questions from Beginners, The Writing Craft, Trends | 8 Comments

Someone wrote to ask, “Should an author who writes historical fiction stick only to fiction? Since so much historical research has to be conducted, how do you feel about authors using their novel research to also pen nonfiction?”

I think it depends on the author’s preference, or maybe their gifting. I don’t have any problem representing authors who write both fiction and nonfiction. However, it’s really tough for a writer to succeed at both. In my view, a novel requires a different set of writing skills than a nonfiction book — novelists require the ability to show, not tell, while nonfiction is all about telling. There are very few examples of writers who have excelled at both. (Yes, there are some, but not many.) And readers simply don’t cross over – most tend to be either fiction readers or nonfiction readers. And historical fiction readers aren’t generally that interested in reading a nonfiction book from a favorite writer, so even a bestselling novelist will find her nonfiction book to be a hard sell in the marketplace. For those very practical reasons, most historical fiction writers tend to stay with the fiction genre. 

Another writer wants to know, “What particular skills do you look for in a writer of historical fiction?”

A strong voice, first of all. The one thing that makes a novel unique is not so much the setting or the characters so much as the voice of the writer. Too many historical novels feel the same — the setting has changed, but the book could have been written by anyone. So what really sets it apart, and the first thing I look for, is a strong author voice. That being said, a strong sense of history and adequate research so that the story feels genuine are essential, of course. I want a story that’s unique and interesting, so it’s best if the writer has a passion for that particular period or the events surrounding the novel. I suppose I also prefer an author with a good vocabulary, particularly appropriate to the setting and time. I like to see a clear sense of mood. Good rhythm to their words. Clear pacing. Great characters in interesting situations. Strong dialogue. Vibrant scenes. Action or events that move me from one page to the next. And, if it’s to have a longlasting quality to it, themes that are greater than boy-meets-girl (which works fine in a historical romance, but we like to see more in a true historical saga). 

And I had one writer get in touch and ask me this: “Should novelists try to keep up on publishing trends? I recently heard a bestselling novelist say she never pays attention to the market – that if she tried to write what is currently selling, chances are the trend will have changed by the time she finished the manuscript. What so you think?”

I generally agree. As an author, if you try to chase the market, you have a tendency to always be BEHIND the trend, so your work is never really fresh. But sometimes a novelist has to pay attention – if nobody is publishing westerns, it helps to have your agent say, “Don’t do a western; we can’t sell it.” Or sometimes a publisher will say, “Do you have ANYONE who can do an Amish romance? We need an Amish book.” That’s when it pays off to watch trends. Of course, a bestselling writer doesn’t need to pay attention to trends – publishers are going to stand in line to work with her, and offer her a great deal of money no matter what she writes.

The fact is, I have to pay attention to trends as an agent. And if I’m representing you, it’s nice to know that you, as a writer, are basically aware of what’s happening in the market. Still, what I care about MOST is that you write a great book – trends or not. I do think some authors worry more about the latest trend than they do about the craft. That’s something I see evidenced at writer conferences, and I’ll admit that it bugs me. A good trend won’t help you sell your story so much as writing a great book.

And a personal aside: Bestselling writer, collaborator, and writing mentor to many, Cecil Murphey, lost his wife after she suffered a stroke over the weekend. Cec is a great guy, and man who has been a friend to me, to this blog, and to many writers who frequent this blog. Our prayers are with Cec and his family today. Hang in there, my friend.  

Must a novel be completed before an agent will look at it?

February 27th, 2013 | Agents, Current Affairs, Proposals, Questions from Beginners, The Business of Writing, Trends | 7 Comments

Someone wrote to ask, “Must a novel always be 100% finished before an agent will want to take a look at it? Or if you spotted great voice in an unfinished work, would you take a look and offer encouragement?”

If I absolutely love the voice, I might sign an author based on the quality of the writing. That happens on occasion. More often, I will look at a project and offer encouragement to the writer if I like his or her writing voice and think it has potential, but still think it needs to be completed. Right now the market is more or less demanding a novel be completed if a publisher is going to take a risk on a new or newer author. So yes, an agent might very well say he likes your work, but put off a decision to sign you until you complete your novel.

Another asked, “How much of a difference does it make to an agent to hear I’ve been referred by one of their current clients? And how does that compare to a face-to-face with an agent at a conference?”

It always makes a difference to me when one of the authors I already represents sends a talented writer my way. I figure the writers I represent are already my friends — we understand one another, so they’re probably going to send people my way who would likely be a fit. So consider that a good start. That said, it still usually takes a face-to-face for me to really get to know someone. A conference meeting is often too short (sometimes ten minutes), but it’s a start. In both cases, it will need to be followed up by great writing and a long talk or two, where we both get a feel for whether or not we’re a fit for one another.

One writer asked, “How are royalties paid? Why is it the contract says you get 10%, but the author never sees that much?”

The standard hardcover contract pays the author 10% of whatever a book sells for on the first 5000 copies, then it rises to 12.5% on the next 5000 copies, then 15% thereafter. (But I should note the standard CBA contract will pay the author somewhere in the 12-to-18% of net — that is, it pays not on the retail price of the book, but on the amount of money received by the publisher.) The publisher keeps tabs on how many copies are sold, and quarterly or semi-annually pays that amount to the author. For subsidiary projects (that is, the words sold in another format, such as an audio book or an e-book), there will be a separate royalty amount. Sometimes a large company (read: “Wal-Mart”) will purchase a big quantity of books, but to do so they’ll insist on a huge discount. In a case like that, the author will be paid a discounted royalty. That’s why it can be hard to track a book’s exact earnings. I recently had an author on the bestsellers list receive a very disappointing check — the bulk of the sales were done through big box stores like Sam’s Club and Costco, so while the number of books sold was high, the discounts made the royalties lower than expected. Does that adequately answer your question? I can say more about royalties and payouts if you have more questions.

Another writer sent me this: “I sent something out to an agent prematurely. The agent rejected my project, but was nice enough to make suggestions for improving it. Now that I’ve taken her advice to heart, would it be reasonable to re-send to her? How unusual is it for an agent to reconsider an author they’ve already rejected?”

While it’s fairly rare for an agent to want to see a project he or she has already rejected, the situation you’re describing is a type of exception you’ll occasionally find. I wouldn’t make a habit of re-sending rejected proposals, for fear of establishing a bad reputation with agents. But if an agent has offered helpful advice, and you’ve really taken those words and improved your work, it wouldn’t be considered impolite to at least go back and ask if that agent would like to see the better, polished version. But be careful… Make sure it’s REALLY better. Nobody is going to look at it a third time.

This came from an experienced magazine writer: “I’ve quered a few agents who said they liked my writing, but there was no market for memoirs. Is there no market for memoir? Should I try to pitch the book as something else?”

Well, if the agents you’re approaching are saying there’s no market for memoir, then, for them at least, there’s no market for memoir. So you either have to look for other agents (who perhaps have a different perspective), or alter your book. My guess is you’ve written something that YOU see as memoir, but agents see as just a personal story — something that doesn’t have the broad appeal it needs, but is simply a cool story about something that happened to you. That’s the sort of thing I see ALL THE TIME, and there’s no market for it. That type of story fits best as a magazine or e-zine piece. If you want to reshape it into another book, you may want to think about the lessons you’ve learned — how can you turn your story into a self-help book, where you focus on the principles for living more effectively, and use your personal story as backstory to buttress your points. That might hold more appeal. OR you could leave it alone and do it as a magazine article, which will garner you more readers anyway.

And this came from a newer writer: “I’m a finalist in a writing contest. I’m also talking with an agent. If I win and get published, would if be customary for my agent to take 15% of the book?”

I love a question that’s off the beaten path. I don’t know that I’ve ever heard this before, so let me try my hand at it… If you came to me, and already had a publishing deal in hand, I would probably not take 15% of the deal. Since I didn’t help you shape the piece, or help you improve it, or shop it to publishers, it wouldn’t feel right to me to do so. I would probably offer to negotiate the contract for you, and hope to improve it, and perhaps suggest taking half my usual commission. (And, if you think I’m simply posing, I invite you to talk with some of the publishers. I’ve done exactly this in the past, so this isn’t some sort of empty windmill-chasing.) That said, other agents may disagree with me entirely. A good agent is going to help you shape your career, not just land one book deal, so they may feel entirely comfortable participating fully in the deal via a 15% commission. Depends on the individual. Don’t let it be a surprise — ask this question up front, in a non-combative way. No sense letting this create a headache for you later.  

And finally, someone sent this: “I know you’re taking a bunch of questions with short answers, but you haven’t been picking on anybody lately. I know you’re trying to be nice, but… well, what is currently driving you crazy? We’d all like to know.”

I received a proposal today that was addressed to 17 agents. All of our names and emails were in the “to” line. I’ve received at least a dozen of those recently. I’m blaming it on the rampant use of hallucinogenic drugs in this country. I mean, come on… The author is cc’ing his proposal to a bunch of us, then expecting us to take it seriously? Like I’m going to fight other agents to grab this one crappy proposal? All of us had the same response: hit “delete.” That’s the current thing that’s driving my crazy.

Wait… it gets worse. So I read a similar proposal, from someone I’ve heard of but who made the same mistake. I sent the author a note, explaining that cc’ing a proposal to a bunch of agents at once makes it look like Amateur Hour, and that he should study the industry, figure out how to create and pitch a proposal, then approach an agent he feels might be a fit. (Isn’t that how you’d approach any other line of work? Do a bit of research on it, to make sure you didn’t look like a moron?) In other words, I took time out of my day to try and help this guy. And what was his response? To send me a nasty note, complaining about the fact that i was scolding him for not doing it right.

That gets him put into my Black File, of course. What is it about the fact that some people simply can’t admit they don’t know everything? Just assume you’ve screwed up, learn from your mistake, and do it better next time. Don’t get defensive. I’ve pretty much stopped going to a couple popular online writing groups for that reason. I had originally been involved because I thought the participants were there to learn, and after a few decades in this business, I figure I’ve got something to share. But it began to feel like pearls before swine after a while. People want to share their ignorance, then HATE to get corrected when they say something stupid. So I’m just not even reading those any more — I figure if writers want to read the advice of the uninformed, it’s not my job to set them straight. Does that answer your question?

Hey, we’re trying to tackle a bunch of topics this month — what have you always wanted to ask a literary agent?

What fiction trends are coming and going?

February 19th, 2013 | Publishing, The Business of Writing, Trends | 39 Comments

I’m trying to catch up on the hundreds of questions people have sent in. Someone wrote to say this: “The popularity in genres seems to go in cycles, with perhaps the exception of romance, which always seems to sell well. Where in this cycle do you see the historical fiction genre right now? In the near future?”

Fiction goes through a cycle with publishers: produce some, watch it grow, produce more, produce too much, cut back, start selling again, produce some, watch it grow, etc. Right now one could argue that there are more historicals being sold than there used to be, but I agree with you — that’s simply a cycle. People love reading about other eras, so while we may be trending down a bit right now in some genres, it will trend back up. That’s how fiction works. In a lousy economy, people want a book that’s an escape to a simpler time, so historicals were doing well. Now that the economy is brighter, we’re seeing a swing back to more contemporaries. Suspense, which also had an explosion with the growth of e-books, seems to have been waning a bit, but since it’s cyclical, they will come back. 

Another reader sent me this: “Is there a certain sub-genre of historical fiction (fantasy, romance, thriller, mystery) that you think is selling best now? And is historical fiction fading out?”

A sub-genre that seems to be trending up is the romance novel with a strong suspense line. Another has been the romance with fantastic or supernatural elements. Some historical periods continue to sell, so there is renewed interest in the Edwardian and Victorian periods (thanks to Downton Abbey, an entire period of time that’s been overlooked is once again popular). And despite slowing, plenty of readers are still in love with the Amish and all things simple. Romance novels set in Texas seem to outsell other settings (no idea why — I find the state flat and hot and not terribly interesting… but I only say that to bug the people from Texas). But historical romances are definitely still a category that sell. Don’t give up on it. 

One reader asked, “Since trends do seem to come and go, would you advise a writer of historical fiction to write in other genres as well?”

I don’t think that’s the right question to be asking. A better question would be, “What’s the right place for me to write?” If you have a particular voice for romance, you should be writing romance. If your voice is literary, you should be writing literary. Frankly, it’s tough to create any sort of brand for yourself if you’re all over the map. (And now the caveat… that’s not necessarily a bad thing. Sometimes you have to write cross-genres to make a living. Such is the life of the artist.) 

And someone asked, “When we see a print run of multiple thousands of copies (for example, this week on Publishers Lunch I noticed a publisher announcing they’re going to print 100,000 copies of a book), where are all those copies going?”

A publisher is only doing a big print run when they’ve spoken to accounts and know they are going to see a lot of big orders for a book. So those books are printed and sent to accounts to fulfill orders, or they are shipped to warehouses in order to be ready to fill re-orders when the book starts selling quickly. In today’s publishing world, where you can go back and quickly reprint books, publishers don’t want to be sitting on tens of thousands of unsold copies — so a big print run means a big marketing budget and a probably bestseller. 

And someone sent me this question: ”As online retailers are selling more and more books, have distribution and ordering practices changed much? Are things different from when you started?”

Things are significantly different from when I first started in the book business. (Dinosaurs no longer roam the earth, for example. And the whole “movable type” idea has speeded things up.) In my view, the change in book distribution has been the biggest shift I’ve seen in my twenty-some years in book publishing. First, book readers moved from independent bookstores to mega-stores. That led to the decline of indies and created the rise of Barnes & Noble (and Borders, who didn’t survive). Second, they began buying books at Big Box stores, so Wal-Mart, Sam’s Club, and Costco suddenly become players  in the industry (even though you wander through the aisles and can find few employees who apparently know how to read, let alone answer anything about books). Third, Amazon came along and created the online bookstore, so that now you don’t need to leave home to buy books. And fourth, the advent of e-books reshaped the patterns again, as Kindle and Nook and iPad owners simply have books downloaded digitally to their devices.

So the business isn’t the same at all. There are fewer people to ask about books, and more pooled ignorance on Amazon reviews,, and a far worse shopping experience than when you could wander the aisles and talk with salespeople who were readers. There’s much more of a willingness to order and wait for the books to be shipped to your home. Publishers are now selling directly to consumers, which they used to eschew, and they’ve had to realign their thinking about book sales. Some say there are fewer book stores (and there ARE fewer brick and mortar stores), but I would argue there are MORE bookstores than ever, since every computer is now a bookstore. Sure, those brick and mortar stores order fewer copies, and they can return the books they don’t sell (which is unlike just about every other industry), they have to still pay freight and stock inventory — making it an expensive business that’s hard to survive in today’s retail environment. For the consumer, your book can be delivered overnight to your door or instantly to your device through the airwaves (presumably by the magic of faeries). So… yes. The industry has gone through a revolution in the past ten years.  

My question for you: What do you LIKE about the changes in today’s publishing world?



How are literary agent’s roles changing in the new world of publishing?

January 2nd, 2013 | Current Affairs, Deep Thoughts, Publishing, The Business of Writing, Trends | 9 Comments

I’ve had a number of people write to me in response to my recent post about 2013 publishing predictions, asking how I felt the role of literary agents is changing. It used to be that an agent basically offered four benefits: (1) an editing/sounding board for writing and ideas; (2) access to publishers; (3) contract and statement assistance; and (4) some type of career advice. There are a bunch of other ideas people bring up (such as “maximize the advance!” and “be the tough guy when things get ugly!”), and no doubt several other iterations of the ideas above, but I think those are the four big content areas in which agents have generally served.

But now we’re in a new era. The way books are produced, marketed, delivered, and sold to readers has changed considerably over the past few years. The sales channels are completely altered. Publishers have overhauled their staffing and methods. New jobs exist that didn’t used to exist, and old ones have faded out of existence. The advent of digital publishing has not just created this new product called “e-books,” but have helped reshape the entire industry. So it only makes sense that a literary agent shouldn’t be doing his or her job the same way it was being done ten years ago. To that end, I thought I’d try to offer thoughts on how I see an agent’s role in contemporary publishing.

First, a good agent is still doing editing, but perhaps even more book and project concepting. Idea development and packaging are an essential part of the role now. Your agent needs to be talking with you not just about “how to do an ebook,” but how various projects and packages fit into your overall business plan.

Second, I think the notion of an agent giving an author access to publishers has evolved into an agent as interactor — networking with various publishing types, as well as connecting with marketing and publicity people, serving as your advocate, and being a well-informed source to keep you abreast of what’s happening in the industry and how you ought to be participating in it. So while the agent undoubtedly is an author’s biggest cheerleader, more importantly he or she helps with “relationship management” for all those parties associated with your books.

Third, a good agent continues to deal with contracts and royalty statements, of course — something that’s become necessary in an industry that seems to have been taken over by attorneys. But more than that, agents today are essentially serving as business managers for the authors they serve — exploring ideas, looking for opportunities, keeping abreast of sales data, suggesting changes, and taking care of those things that allow the author to focus on writing. Making sense of sales data and (For all the yammering about agents that went on with some popular bloggers in recent years, it’s humorous to note that all those writers who found success immediately went out and landed an agent, in order to have someone knowledgable assist with this area.)

Fourth, most successful literary agents are still offering career advice, but are also heavily involved with platform creation, marketing plans, public relations, and readership growth. Part of the agent’s job these days is to make sure the author remains relevant in the market, which means the agent needs to remain on top of trends much more than we used to. This is perhaps the biggest area of change for agents — and the one that separates the agent who simply wants to “do the deal and disappear.”

Fifth, and one of the ways the job has evolved recently, is that agents are now actively pursuing not just subrights (foreign editions, translations, dramatic rights, derivatives, etc), but serving as a sort of clearinghouse for author opportunities. So, for example, offering advice marketing copy, or discussing how an author website reflects the overall brand, or connecting with the technical specialists who can help for a specific problem, are all elements of the job that I didn’t used to do, but that I regularly find myself doing now.

I’ve been told more than once that the role of the literary agent is fading away — but I’ve also been told that publishers were going away, the printed book was dead, and in an age of an omnipresent web we would no longer need sales people. All of those things were untrue. The industry has changed, and the role of the literary agent continues to change with it.

My Publishing Predictions for 2013

December 31st, 2012 | Current Affairs, Deep Thoughts, The Business of Writing, Trends | 29 Comments

Okay, time for my big publishing predictions for 2013…

1. Some of the large publishers will buy up the smaller micro-publishers who have succeeded in niche markets. (This only makes sense. Penguin/Random House are merging, and want to expand their reach. Hachette is perhaps the most forward-thinking of the companies, and must see the opportunity. It’s possible HarperCollins and Simon & Schuster will combine forces, and they are two companies who have always sought to maximize niche markets. MacMillan does as well. So look for some of those guys who started in their garage a couple years ago to cash out.) 

2. Literary agents will re-define themselves. (This has already begun to happen with some multi-person agencies. The growth of e-books and the opportunity authors have to self-publish means an agent, to demonstrate value, has to prove he or she can assist with self-publishing, with marketing and sales planning for a wide variety of projects, with career development for authors who are working with traditional publishers as well as publishing their own books, with contract evaluations in an age of significant intellectual property rights changes, and with business management. An author isn’t just a writer any more — he or she is a self-proprietary business person, and good agents will re-define themselves in order to assist with that change.) 

3. E-book royalties will grow. (E-publishers are already paying in the 50% neighborhood, so traditional publishers are going to have to be competitive. I can see one of the Big Six boosting e-royalties to 30%.)

4. Several of the major and mid-major publishers will move to strictly digital catalogs and royalty statements. (Think of it: At many of the larger houses, they’re still hiring people to print off stacks of paper and stuff them into envelopes. Welcome to the 80′s! This is a change that’s way overdue. And there’s limited value in expensive book catalogs any more — a digital catalog is cheaper and more nimble when it comes to updating or shifting the sales priorities. Lest you skip over this one, Dear Writer, understand that it’s important both to your marketing and to your ability to get access to your numbers.) 

5. A photo will be released that shows President Obama’s Department of Justice officials kissing Jeff Bezos on the lips. (Okay this is just a wild guess, but that’s the only explanation for the recent e-book pricing decision favoring Amazon. The court’s decisions make no sense at all when it comes to consumer protection or publisher assistance, so I figure secret love photos must be behind it all.)

6. Barnes and Noble will be sold. (For the record, I don’t have a shred of evidence to suggest this will happen. But with Microsoft investing a half-bilion in the Nook, I wonder if a publishing conglomerate will decide to go all in, take over the brick-and-mortar stores, and try to compete with Amazon that way.)

7. Speaking of Amazon, I think they’re going to start offering a print version of any e-book they sell. (It just makes sense, and the technology already exists. E-book sales growth has slowed, and it’s clear print isn’t going to just fade away any time soon.)

8. There will be a lot more short-form books sold in 2013. (As novel publishing moves back to the era of Charles Dickens, serials will become more popular, and readers will once again start flocking to interval-based stories that are short, episodic, and create a long story arc. Think “Downton Abbey” but in print.)

9. That will mean the industry will have to re-think the way it markets and sells e-books. (This is a no-brainer. They don’t sell songs the same way they used to sell albums, and they won’t sell shorter e-books in the same way they’ve sold printed tomes. The change will probably include less big-budget pre-sales marketing and more tracking of sales data in order to determine which projects to promote. And that will mean the days of “your book has 60 days to succeed or it will die and be out of stores” will change.)

10. Someone (Amazon? Best Buy? B&N? Books-a-Millon? Sony?) will produce a free e-book reader and make it available to subscribers. (It will work this way: If you agree to buy 10 books, perhaps with an agreement to purchase 10 more, you’ll get a free reader, and it will come loaded with a whole slug of classic public domain titles, such as Dickens, Twain, Hawthorne, etc. E-reader sales are slowing, and companies are going to have to decide if the focus is on the once-every-two-years purchase of a reader, or on the consumable purchases of books. I’m guessing the focus is on books, which means the value of the e-reader device goes down.)

My miscellaneous meanderings. The best part of making predictions is that it makes me look like an expert, and by this time next year you’ll have forgotten all about them, so I can always claim to be right. 

Happy New Year!

Career Planning in the Wild, Wild West

November 19th, 2012 | Agents, Career, Conferences, Proposals, Publishing, Self-Publishing, Trends | 22 Comments

 

While on an agent’s panel at ACFW in September, I sat next to Lee Hough, one of the smartest and hardest working agents in the business. While we all fielded the typical questions we get as panelists, someone asked a question about the current state of affairs in publishing, and how agents are faring.

 I tend to take a positive, entrepreneurial, and philosophical approach when answering questions about the challenges of publishing.

Lee, however, hit the mark when he said “It’s like the wild, wild west out there right now.” His summation about the new landscape of publishing has really stuck with me. In fact, it’s a new constant on the landscape of my daily work life these days — right alongside MacGregor Literary’s long-standing company philosophy that “good is always better than fast.”

As positive as I try to remain, I’ll admit, it’s felt exceptionally difficult to place books and find homes for authors these past few months. Even with the successes I’ve enjoyed this year in spite of it all, it feels like I’m on more uneven ground than ever. And I know agents aren’t the only ones who feel this way.

Marketers are constantly scrambling to orient themselves to what it takes to get readers to buy in a noisy online environment. Sales teams are faced with succeeding in spite of the literal crumbling of their brick & mortar customer base. Publicists are being asked to do more with less. Editors are overworked. Authors are no longer just invited by publishers to help market their books, but are expected to do so. In fact more and more, the strength of an author’s proposal is weighed as much for the type and number of readers they bring to the table as it is for the quality of their writing. Maybe more.

Top that off with the consideration that authors are not only competing with other authors for shelf space, but with the reality that booklovers are so easily lured away from the rewards of leisure reading by endorphin fixes that pummeling pigs with birds, or outrunning evil demon monkeys can deliver far more instantly.

If I think about it too hard, it can start to feel fruitless to spend time and energy building a serious novelist’s career in a time when e-books have flooded the market and caused so much confusion over what is good and what resembles cow dung. But, I have faith in my ability to help sort out the good from the bad for publishers and authors, and I figure that’s worth something. A lot, actually.

Still, I’m sure I’m not the only agent who feels like it’s us in the hot seat these days. We’re constantly having to urge our authors who want to go the traditional publishing route to be patient and wait for the right timing. It’s not always easy to encourage authors to continue to wait for decisions from acquisition boards – decisions that seem to be taking so much longer than ever – when the seemingly instant brass ring of self-publishing is flashing in the corner of our collective eye.

E-publishers have an edge, of course, when it comes to delivering content at rapid speed. But I believe it’s the new frontier for them as well. In the end – finding readers and making the grade still comes down to effective marketing, word of mouth, and content.

The good news on this front is that where we’ve tended to take an either/or approach, I do think the two are starting to merge. I’m excited to be talking with publishers about how authors can do both successfully. We’re talking more and more about how market savvy, and marketing savvy, authors can help publishers lead the way.

While I continue to take the long view and keep my eye on the horizon, as we always try to do here at MacGregor Literary, I’ll admit, Lee’s perspective gave me a huge pick-me-up when I needed it, and actually has me riding a little higher in the saddle these days.

Go ahead. Call me an optimist. (Or, I suppose you could call me a cowgirl. Wouldn’t hurt my feelings — I’ve got a hand tooled leather belt with my name on it, a silver buckle, pointy black boots, and everything.)

I’m excited about authors who are in this for the long haul and are willing to ride on rough ground. This new territory – Lee’s “wild, wild west” is most definitely not for the faint of heart – and, honestly, that suits me just fine.

On staying current, book clubs, and drinking juice naked

November 6th, 2012 | Current Affairs, Deep Thoughts, Questions from Beginners, Trends | 21 Comments

I’ve had people sending me dozens of questions recently, so I thought I’d try to catch up by changing things a bit and offering several short questions and answers. So the next few days of the blog will sort of head in a new direction…

Someone wrote and noted, “I have a busy life, and I seem to spend much of it in front of my computer. How can I keep up with the industry? What do you fell is worth sacrificing my writing time to follow?”

My choices may be different from your own, of course, but I subscribe to Publisher’s Weekly (the bible of our industry), and I get Publishers’ Lunch and PW Daily on my screen every day. They offer a summary of news, with links I can go to when I want to find details. (For example, today the Authors Guild asked the government to look into the proposed Penguin/Random House merger, since it turns out there just MAY be a bit of market-cornering going on.) These keep me in touch with the industry. There are a number of blogs I like, but I’ll admit that I tend to look at the blogs of the authors I represent, and I can’t quite keep up with all the good blogs that have been created. Novel Rocket is good because it keeps you on top of a lot of titles. I still read GalleyCat. Most of the publishers have their own company blogs. I like Mike Hyatt’s excellent blog, Salon.com, bookbusinessmag.com, Digital Book World, and I belong to a couple discussion groups to talk about the business and marketing side of publishing. I’ll invite readers to suggest other good industry blogs in the “comments” section…

Someone wrote and asked, “What can you tell me about audio books? My publisher isn’t interested in producing my books in audio, though they sell well in print. Is there a way to do that on my own?”

The reason your publisher isn’t very interested? Money. There’s just not enough money to make with most audio books. Most of the New York houses will tell you that the audio book of a bestseller will only sell about 10% of what it sells in print. (So a book that moved 60,000 copies in hardcover will only sell 6000 in audio.) That’s pretty skinny, especially when you consider that it’s not like most sub-rights. If your publisher sells sub-rights for your book to a book club, or serial rights to a magazine, or excerpt rights for a gift book, all they have to do is send an electronic file. There’s no real “production” cost to the publisher. But an audio book means they’ve got to rent a studio, pay an engineer, have an editor work on a shortened script, and possibly hire an actor to read the lines (unless the author agrees to do it himself, in which case the publisher has to pay plane fare, hotel, and meals). All of that means your publisher is investing dollars, and the pay-off generally isn’t great. For books that don’t hit the bestseller lists, chances are the publisher will lose money.

An alternative is to do it yourself — keep the rights, create your own scripts, talk with a local radio station about renting you an empty studio on a weekend at a steep discount, and pay their board-op $50 to record it. But then you’ve got to produce it (free as an MP3 file, but $1 per CD plus $1 per case and label if you go that route), store it, ship it, and, above all, SELL it. Most self-published projects lose money because the person who created the product doesn’t know how to sell it. If you don’t know how to sell audio books, I’d encourage you to take a careful look at your business plan before jumping in.

Another person wrote to ask, “When do most editors draw the literary line on alliteration? Two words? Three? Four?”

A cool question, compadre. Every engaging editor eschews everyday alliteration. (Is this making you sick yet? It ought to.) Alliteration is out. It’s considered too cutesy, or too lazy perhaps. My response would be “two words.” If you disagree, feel free to leave a comment.

An author wrote to say, “A book club (not Oprah) has selected my book for this month, and asked for possible discussion questions. I felt a little like I was wandering down a dark alley. What do book clubs discuss? The stuff I sent her sounded like an English teacher created them. What are they looking for?”

Book clubs are generally looking for open-ended questions (that is, questions that can’t be answered with a “yes” or “no”) that cause readers to either (1) interact with the text, or (2) reveal their perspectives and attitudes, or (3) get reader talking about themselves and the choices they would make in a similar situation. So a text-interaction question might be, “What did you think of Fiona’s description of forgiveness?” or “What do you think motivated Beatrice to stick a finger in Daphne’s eye?” A self-revelation question would be something more along the lines of, “What would you have said when the inspector unbuttoned her blouse?” or “When you’ve faced a life-or-death situation, what was going through your mind?” I’m one who doesn’t like to see “lessons” or “meanings” imposed onto readers. Part of the fun of literature is discussing what the story means, rather than having my English teacher show up to explain the meanings to me.

Congratulations on getting selected, by the way. Maybe next time Oprah will show up.

Another author sent a note that included this: “I’ve written music reviews for weekly newspapers, been published in a mid-sized daily paper, pen a monthly column about our local music scene, and have published educational material in a quarterly booklet. Some of my work has been picked up by other sites, used in organizations, and put in newsletters in at least seven states. Is all that worth mentioning in a non-ficiton book query, since queries need to focus on the writing at hand?”

You may not want to give your entire publishing history in a query letter, but you should certainly offer a short summary of your writing experience so that the agent or editor reading your query letter grasps the fact that you are an experienced writer. The purpose of a query letter is to get someone interested in YOU and YOUR IDEA — so by deleting all the references to you, you’d be relying strictly on someone falling in love with your idea. That would be a mistake. A query letter is a sales tool – sell them on yourself as well as your book idea.

The Last Word:  A good friend tells me she was reading a bottle of juice recently and found this: This ambrosial smoothie begs thoughts of faraway beaches and lush tropical islands… Just think palm trees and scantily-clad natives. When it comes to juice, we understand your need to get naked…”  Uh, when it comes to JUICE? Good grief. And here I’ve been drinking grape juice while clothed all these years. Who knew?

Got a publishing question? Let me hear from you.


What do I need to know about writing my memoir?

September 27th, 2012 | Favorite Books, The Writing Craft, Trends | 7 Comments

Someone wrote to ask, “So what do we need to keep in mind when creating memoir?”

Fist, keep in mind there’s a difference between “memoir” and “autobiography.” An autobiography is a straight retelling of one’s life — what happened, what were the events/decisions, what did those result in. A memoir is a more personal narrative of the significant change points in one’s life. It doesn’t have to be linear, whereas an autobiography is almost always linear. And the focus of a memoir can be more on the effects in your personal life — what you were feeling, what you learned, how you changed. The end result is almost always on a catharsis of some kind. So while the goal of autobiography is to get the facts straight, the goal of memoir is something more akin to “revealing myself and my story, in order to reveal principles that will help others live more effectively.” (This isn’t a dictionary definition, it’s a MacGregor Definition.)

Second, people understand the world best through story, so that’s how you have to think. What are the stories that reveal your life and your character? What stories happened to you that changed you?  You see, if you’re not a celebrity, nobody really cares about your everyday life (and, to tell you the truth, I’ve never cared to read celebrity biographies very much because…well, I don’t care about THEIR everyday life either). If someone wanted to understand my life, to see who I am and why, they wouldn’t care about a cold retelling of the facts. They’d rather hear some of my story — my dad’s conversation with me one morning just before he committed suicide, the person who told me I could write, my success as a writer, my failure as a publisher, my mom’s ugly death, the miracle that occurred in my car, the fact that people have stayed with me when I was a jerk, etc. I think if an author can get the stories down, tell them honestly and with a strong voice, they’re well on the way to creating memoir.

Third, most memoirs are about moving forward and finding answers, not about moving toward destruction. Every fiction writer knows an audience likes a redemption story best. So don’t just tell me about all your mistakes — show me. Don’t assume I’m interested in something just because you are. Make me like you before you dump dirt. If I’m not feeling sympathy for you, I’m going to stop reading. And don’t share a bunch of bad stuff about your family, thinking your catharsis is necessarily fascinating reading to others. Again, story will trump a recitation of events. (In I WENT TO THE ANIMAL FAIR, Heather Harpham reveals the presence of some mental illness in her family by telling the story of visiting her grandmother’s house one day and finding toast nailed to the wall. Her entire family was there, but nobody talked about it. They all pretended they didn’t see it, or maybe that toast on the wall was a routine occurrence. It’s a fascinating detail.)

I often get people sending me their personal story — “THIS happened to me, and everybody tells me I should write a book about it!” My response is usually a yawn. Yes, I’m a spiritual person who believes God is alive and doing great things. Yes, miracles still happen. And yes, lives get changed in incredible ways, sometimes through supernatural power and sometimes through dumb luck, and the re-telling of that can be valuable (after all, people have been telling dramatic stories since cave men sat around the fire telling whoppers about the great mastodon hunt). But the fact that something amazing happened to you doesn’t have much to do with the creation of a great memoir. The whole “personal story” book era has come and gone (circa 1977). Like I said yesterday, nobody is buying your personal story.

So fourth, the quality of the craft is essential. If you can write exceptionally well, and reveal yourself on the page, and get beyond the retelling of WHAT happened in order to get us to think about the greater issues of HOW that changed you and WHY that’s important and WHAT the principles for living more effectively are, THEN you’ve got the potential to write a memoir.  As a reader I’ve got to relate to your character, trust that you’re being honest, be interested/entertained by your story, and expect you to relate to timeless questions about life faced in complex circumstances. I want to read about the decisions you made, knowing those decisions might not have been right, and then read about the results. If all those things come into play, you’ve got potential with your memoir. It’s not a recounting of an entire life; it’s the well-written, thoughtful story of an author in a season of time.

So I suppose it’s fair to ask what some good examples are. I can think of several…

- Anne Lamott’s TRAVELING MERCIES. Her spiritual pilgrimage is interesting and inspirational, and her writing is fabulous.

- Jeanette Walls’ THE GLASS CASTLE has fabulous writing and tells a story you’ll long remember.

- Haven Kimmel’s A GIRL NAMED ZIPPY is a hilarious look at growing up in a small town.

-Lauren Winner’s GIRL MEETS GOD is a dynamite book, and one of those projects that I continually wonder why it isn’t talked about more often.

-Jenny Lawson’s LET’S PRETEND THIS NEVER HAPPENED is a riot, and (mostly) true.

-Madeleine L’Engle’s TWO PART INVENTION is the story of her marriage, and A CIRCLE OF QUIET is a contemplative book with a grand theme.

There are others. A friend of mine, Lisa McKay is just releasing LOVE AT THE SPEED OF EMAIL, which I think is charming. (Got my hard copy today!) What memoir writing do you appreciate?

 

Should I write my cool personal story?

September 24th, 2012 | Current Affairs, Deep Thoughts, The Business of Writing, Trends | 17 Comments

I frequently get proposals telling me about someone’s cool personal story. Right now, I’m looking at a New York cop who busted several organized crime figures, a guy who spent his life in the bush, the child of an on-the-road professional musician, a former Islamic soldier who came to see the world differently, and a very talented poet and songwriter who survived breast cancer. These are all fairly interesting stories, and I doubt very much I’ll take any of them on. Why? Because there’s very little market for personal story books. 

Here’s what I consider to be a hard truth: You may have led a fascinating life, seen incredible things, and even had miracles happen to you. But in today’s market, there’s not a ton of interest in publishing this information in book form. And while you may not like that truth, the fact is, it’s where we are in today’s publishing economy. No matter how successful these books used to be, or how interesting your story is to you, publishers just aren’t selling enough copies of personal story books to make it worthwhile anymore. 

I mention this because I’ve been seeing more and more personal story proposals cross my desk. (In hard economic times, MORE people create proposals, apparently thinking they’re going to cash in and make some easy money. Ha!) But right now network television is filled with reality shows — and these are basically personal stories. There are 20 million blogs — many of them people sharing their stories. In fact, the web is filled with people who want to tell the world about their stories. So there are cool personal stories everywhere, and they’re free. And that’s taken away the incentive people have to purchase a personal story book, unless there is a great sense of celebrity or media associated with the book. I represented Lisa Beamer’s post-9/11 memoir, LET’S ROLL, a few years ago, then did Marilyn McCoo & Billy Davis’ UP, UP AND AWAY, a couple years ago sold THROUGH THE STORM authored by Britney Spears’ mom, Lynne, and last year hit the New York Times list with Mike Hingson’s THUNDER DOG. All of those books did well, but a couple had major celebrities tied to them, and the other two were about one of the biggest media stories in our nation’s history. Would anyone have published Lisa’s account of her life with Todd if he hadn’t been killed while heroically trying to take back a plane from Islamic terrorists? No, they wouldn’t. Would a publisher be willing to listen to a Louisiana mom talk about the lessons she’s learned if her eldest child hadn’t become one of the world’s biggest music stars? No way. 

You see, in our contemporary culture, there are a million great stories. It’s rare for one of them to stand out enough that it needs a book to share that story with the world. It’s why I’ve rejected at least a dozen books from finalists on various reality TV shows (Biggest Loser, Survivor, America’s Next Top Model, etc). In the market’s view, someone who has come close on one of those shows has HAD their fifteen minutes of fame. A book isn’t going to put any extra time on that clock. If you have a great story, you may want to share it in other venues (such as the internet) in order to get your message out. 

Speakers seem to have the hardest time hearing this lesson — “But I’ve got a GREAT story! People who hear me speak at a conference all rave about me. Their lives change. They’re never the same. They wet their pants in excitement!” Uh-huh. I think that’s great. But unless you’re going to be there, to tell your story to potential readers and hand-sell each copy, that doesn’t do the publisher much good. And that’s why even busy speakers these days are finding it tough to get a deal on their personal story book. (And that’s why I routinely encourage busy speakers to consider self-publishing. An audience in a room CAN be persuaded to buy a book… and the speaker will make more on those self-pubbed copies than if he or she were getting a royalty anyway.) 

Instead, if you’ve got this cool story that needs to be told, consider turning it inside out. In other words, don’t focus on your personal story – focus on the principles for living that come out of your story. Don’t just use the book to tell what happened – use the book to share the principles for living you’ve learned, and use your story to illustrate those principles. You see, people still want to live effectively. They want to learn how to lose weight, or make money, or be successful, or find peace with God. But they don’t want to buy your book and just hear about your life. That said, they’re still willing to buy a book that offers a big promise, that answers their questions, that solves the big problems of life. So if you feel you’ve got some sort of dynamite story, don’t focus on re-telling everyone what happened in your life. Instead, focus on the lessons learned, write about them, and use some of your story as examples in your text. A much more effective method these days — and, if you have a platform, far more likely to help you land a publishing deal. 

And one more word… What’s clear recently is that the internet is killing nonfiction book sales. People have discovered they can find those same answers on the web for free, so nonfiction sales are in often struggling right now. Publishers, authors, and agents are trying to stay ahead of that curve by figuring out what nonfiction books readers ARE willing to buy… but the prospects in nonfiction self-help are sketchy. People still want answers to the evergreen questions (how can I be healthy? how can I make money money? how can I be at peace? how can I know God? how can I ever be as cool as Chip if I’m not Scottish?), but we’re not sure they’re going to continue buying those answers in book form if they can get something just as good for free. There are still some cool stories that get told (we’re working with Kylie Bisutti to share her story of moving from being a top Victoria’s Secret model to talking with women about modesty and body image), but without celebrity or significant media attention, it’s an uphill climb. 

So before you decide to pen that cool personal story about how you kicked drugs, lost weight, found your muse, made a fortune, and learned to glow in the dark, be aware that there may not be anyone interested in reading it in a book. 

A guest blog: BookJolt

August 10th, 2012 | Marketing and Platforms, Trends | 6 Comments

Last week I mentioned Athena Dean, who founded WinePress Publishing. She got in touch with me to tell me what she’s doing these days, and I thought you’d find it interesting. So today’s guest blog comes from Athena, who has helped coach authors through the daunting task of book production, publicity, advertising, and promotions as they try to find success with their self-published books… 

The Power of Free: Promotion Your Way

Recently I canvassed some successful authors and learned that one-third of those surveyed absolutely hate promotion. Some called it their biggest frustration as a published author. I don’t blame them. For many, promotion can be a frustrating and a hard-to-measure endeavor — but it’s necessary if a book project is to achieve success. I think Bob Mayer and Jen Talty sum up the importance of promotion in The Shelfless Book: The Complete Digital Author: “Content is King and Promotion is Queen: together they rule the publishing world. Today, you really can’t afford one without the other.”

Contrary to the experience of many, promotion doesn’t have to be agonizing. Not long ago I got together to brainstorm with a couple of friends of mine—the Miller brothers, whose minds run on wired-to-promote tracks. For years the Miller brothers have dreamed of giving their books away for free in a format that could go viral and create visibility and a platform for their other books. As award-winning Warner Press authors of young adult fiction and technology, as well as design and marketing experts, they are passionate about getting their books—and the books of other authors—in front of the right audiences. My experience as head of a publishing company has been in coaching hundreds of authors through production, publicity, advertising and promoting of their book products. So when Christopher and Allan Miller and I started talking about implementing our ideas about how to make promotion easier for other authors, the light bulb went on. And it had to do with giving something of value away—for free!

The concept of giving something away to attract customers is nothing new. In his wonderful 2009 book Free: The Future of a Radical Price, Chris Anderson wrote: Most transactions have an upside and a downside, but when something is “free!” we forget the downside. “Free!” gives us such an emotional charge that we perceive what is being offered as immensely more valuable than it really is. Why? I think it’s because humans are intrinsically afraid of loss. The real allure of “free!” is tied to this fear. There’s no visible possibility of loss when we choose a “free!” item (it’s free). But suppose we choose the item that’s not free. Uh oh, now there’s a risk of having made a poor decision—the possibility of loss. And so, given the choice, we go for what is free.

The Miller brothers and I started talking about ways to utilize the power of free and the effectiveness of social media to distribute books instantly to fans and their friends. There is a recognized value in offering great stories for free to develop a relationship between the author and reader. We talked about how tying the power of free and instant with word-of-mouth recommendations from fans. What could be more powerful than removing the barriers of cost and access entirely? Or empowering loyal readers to share books with hundreds or thousands of friends with one click?

Out of our talks came the idea for a company whose backbone is a tool to help authors promote their books and connect directly with their readers. We came up with a way to give authors a tool that makes promotion fun, easy, and pays them for every page of their book that is read online. Now, in addition to traditional pay-per-book-sold models, authors have the ability to monetize their books in an entirely new way: pay-per-page-read.

I read a lot of Christian fiction, and 40% of all religious fiction is selling in e-book format, according to the Book Industry Study Group. Some traditional publishers have figured out that giving an e-book away for free (if it’s a great read) boosts sales of the printed edition.  So on July 17, 2012, \our new author-centric company BookJolt was launched. Bringing great content to the world through effective promotion is what BookJolt is all about. At the heart what we offer is the Free Reader. For now it’s called the BookJolt Free-Embeddable-Viral-Book-Reader-Widget or FEVBRW for short. But you can help us rename it on our website if you have a better name.  [Editor's Note: Good idea. I can't see FEVBRW catching on. Fever Brow? Sounds like it'll make you sick...]

The way it works is similar to the free games or apps that you download. They’re free because advertisements create revenue for the app developer. If you don’t mind the ads, you don’t have to pay. Sure, there are often beefier, more feature-rich versions that you can upgrade to for a small fee if you find the apps useful. But either way, the apps can be tried risk-free because of the ad revenue stream that exists. Our embeddable Free Reader works the same way. Think YouTube for Books! A free-to-read, easy-to-share, one-click version of the book that costs the author NOTHING (well, there is a modest set-up fee) and allows their stories to go viral. We are able to keep the cost to authors low because the shared ad revenue helps offset our production costs. And it will earn authors income as readers discover and enjoy their stories. The tool will also allow authors to have personal advertisements throughout the free reader version of their book, with hot links to all their e-books and print books for sale. A more advanced version will include immediate reporting and live interaction tools.

If you want to check out the Free Reader, click on this link. Click on all the buttons and take a good look around. Since we are in the final development stages, there’s a feedback button at the bottom of the reader. We want to hear from you! In mid-August BookJolt will begin a 30-day closed beta test to refine the analytics, work out the bugs, and make improvements based on our beta authors’ feedback.

In addition to our focus on promotion, BookJolt also offers independent publishing services for those who need help in that area. Those services are completely independent from the Free Reader. In other words, as a royalty published author, you can take advantage of the Free Reader without ever using any of our publishing services. What sets our publishing services apart is our commitment to offering our services à la carte, rather than bundled. We offer editing, typesetting, cover design, marketing consulting, sales and distribution, social media management, web design, and interactive picture book app development. Rather than a stock, one-size-fits-all option where typically there are elements that are unnecessary or overpriced but are included to increase the perceived value, we offer what authors need and want.

We’re excited about where we’re heading. As a team we are committed to being author-centric in everything we do. We’re convinced that if we, as authors, help other authors, and treat them as we would want to be treated, that we as a company will succeed alongside our BookJolt authors. And we’re looking for electrifying results from this exciting new venture as we explore creative ways to take the frustration out of marketing and provide other author services. If you are interested in being part of the thirty-day beta test, please email me directly at athena@bookjolt.com. We are hand picking the content/authors for the closed period and will decide on which titles to include during the third week of August.